Tuesday, March 9, 2010

over a thousand hills i walk with you

In part one Jeanne's parents were with her in the kitchen with her then they started talking about these people and they were bad. Then they heard a loud noise out side and when they waned to see who was is but when they went to the door to open it; this man was right there and they were scared the dad was right there and when the dad was going to say some thing they killed her dad. I thought that was very sad i felt very bad about every thing I think she is very strong I would of cry by now.

I think she is going to find a man to help her with her life and so they can live together for ever and they can have kids. That is what I think about what will happened in the book the other thing I like to is how she tells or write the story. The reaction I had was impressed because I didn't now that would happened in the kitchen I was very scared because I thought that she was going to die or the man was going to kill her.

One of the questions I had was Will she pay for her scholarship or will she stay a lone?

Will she find  another home for her and will she find the money to pay for the house and her college?

I feel bad for her because I think she is going to have a baby boy the main thing is that the bad people from the army killed her parents. I think they didn't have to kill her parents for no reason I think they did it for no reason just for fun. They don't want no one to kill there parents so why did they kill her family and her parents.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Erica,

    Wow! You had a lot to say about Part 1 of your book. You have some great ideas here. However, some revision is needed to this post. Please see me for a conference during class on Monday 3/15.

    Mrs. Clack

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